Post by hermin1 on Oct 26, 2010 20:48:01 GMT -5
Lt. Comdr. John C. Waldron,US Navy was the leader of a Bomber Squadron that played a major role in the Battle of Midway,on June 4,1942(World War II). He and nearly all members of his squadron, were lost during this famous Battle.
He was awarded the Purple Heart and the Navy Cross ,posthumously,for his valor and bravery.
Below is the major part of his family history. He had 5 Siblings, and one that died very young. He attended and graduated from the US Naval Academy at Anapolis,MD.He was enrolled in the Flight Training School at Pensacola florida, and later became an instructor there and at the US Naval Academy.
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folks, I think I put in a sentence that to me seems rather awkward(the last sentence in paragraph1). Can someone please advise on correct phrasing of the facts in that sentence?
He was awarded the Purple Heart and the Navy Cross ,posthumously,for his valor and bravery.
Below is the major part of his family history. He had 5 Siblings, and one that died very young. He attended and graduated from the US Naval Academy at Anapolis,MD.He was enrolled in the Flight Training School at Pensacola florida, and later became an instructor there and at the US Naval Academy.
img526.imageshack.us/img526/475/johncwaldronfamchart1.jpg
folks, I think I put in a sentence that to me seems rather awkward(the last sentence in paragraph1). Can someone please advise on correct phrasing of the facts in that sentence?
